After each in-class essay we do, I compose a list of grammar errors for my students to fix. Although it is anonymous, they seem to enjoy it if they recognize one of their own mistakes. I try to include at least one from each students' paper. Here is an example set:
Oops! Sheet
Run-on; Comma Splices – These are actually two sentences.
Above
the fireplace there is a small nature picture, that picture is mixed with green
and brown colors.
The
floor is made of wood, it is a classic color.
Many
people want to get a living room like that, it is so beautiful and unique.
Two
blue and two white pillows are on the couches, they are very soft and
comfortable.
On
the left, there is a fireplace on the wall, there is a panel.
Fragment (no verb or
no subject)
In
short, the living room very big and beautiful designs.
Combine sentences
because they repeat information.
Near
the lamp is a window. There is a
door next to the window.
Articles/Nouns – Need
a / an OR the
I like classic living room better
than modern living room.
Behind the couch, there is a long
black stairs.
It is classic color.
The room is shallow color.
There is a bright glass door of
balcony.
